follow-up to the season premiere. It had great humor (toilet or otherwise) great acting (perhaps the best in the series), and a casual plot development, the perfect makings of a great season!
To start off....toilet humor.
Richie. Yes. You probably are just disgusting. But I have some constructive criticism on making the toilet humor better. My main concern is the audio clip used for the farting.
See, it sounds too much like Fat Jerkface from Austin Powers just ate the entire Bush's baked beans factory and let loose a wind greasier than he is. I believe that it should be more explosive and dry sounding, or more of a squeaker. Right now, it has too many different sounds overlapping, and it ruins the humor of the fart. The one with Ness worked well, but Wario's not so much.
Secondly, the game of scrabble. It wasn't finished, not by a long shot. GRRR! THE RAGE!
The word played was only 6 points, and there aren't enough S's in the game to have both Wario and Waluigi hold 2 S's in their racks WHILE 2 S's were already on the board. On a side note, A**hole is a word, while Dumba** is not. Official Scrabble Dictionary.
I think quite the opposite to your opinon about the toilet humor. This time around, it was actually funny! Especially Wario's fart, or rather Waluigi's spazz-attack episode
. Ness's was... a bit pooly timed, but it would've been better to just skip over the fact that he farted in the diologue like it never happened. I would ease into the jokes; they're funny, but most fans don't seem to expect humor like that. That's the only reason this is an issue of discussion
And I think you're being a little a lot
too nitt-picky about the scrabble scene. I
ed at the fact that waluigi actually put down "a**" as a word, then when they revealed their racks, it was a really funny joke that was worth bending the laws of Scrabble. (I might add that just because "dumba**" was in Waluigi's rack, that does not
mean it was put down as a word in the game, or that it even has to be an real word at all.) It was a funny joke, that's all.