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 Post subject: Forever War - Lord Gavin
PostPosted: Wed Apr 18, 2012 2:56 pm 
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Again, sitting around at work without much anything to do, so I decided to try my had at something I haven't done in a long time: Poetry. Certainly, I'm no stranger to it, but I'm no Shakespeare either, so I'm unsure as how I'll fair after all this time away from it.

Well, below you'll find more of my usual "Blind writing", which seemed to form together into a rather short and sweet piece. In all honesty, it's pretty simple, but sometimes that's all you need in poetry. Still, I reserve those words and leave it open to the views of my readers/critics.

Take a gander through it and, please, let me know what you think.
Above all, enjoy.

(Note: In order to hav gotten the structure I wanted, I had to use an image of the text below. Just so everyone knows)

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Gavin MacLean

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 Post subject: Re: Forever War - Lord Gavin
PostPosted: Wed Apr 18, 2012 7:54 pm 
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Not bad. It's catchy and it rhymes.

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 Post subject: Re: Forever War - Lord Gavin
PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2012 7:17 pm 
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Nice poem! It rhymes.
I like it! Good job! ^_^


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