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 Post subject: Re: Shadow Of The Eclipse - Comments
PostPosted: Sat Apr 02, 2011 7:31 pm 
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And now chapter 6 is up.
Enjoy. ;D

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SO. MANY. ERRORS! xDD
Besides the errors, it's good...(^^

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And with that... *POOF*!
Chapter 7 is now up. Huray! 8D

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Chapter 8 is up.
AWAY WITH YOU!

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....I kinda think you have too much fun announcing a new chapter out..

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I liked the recent chapters and all it's certainly got me hooked

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And now, with chapter 9 up, so begins the real drama of of the story.
As well, this is a new mile marking for the longest chapter so far. YUPEE! XD

Anyway, enjoy.

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And with that... HOLY CRAMOLY! Chapter 10 is up.
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With this, I surpass the Inception and take the lead.
Chapter 11 is up. Go and enjoy. ;D

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*is literally still shaking*
DDDx too many blaadees...T___T
I felt like screaming at parts because it scared me so much..
But I'm guessing since it did have such a huge reaction..it was really really good..

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And from the depth of awesome arises the existence of Chapter 12!
In other words, Chapter 12 is up.

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Alright, rewrote most of chapter 11 - 14 and NOW the story's finished (minus full spell check from those I've talked to)
NOW THE STORY'S FINISHED!

Hopefully, this time, I've got it right and the story is as it should be.
With that all said, please do enjoy.

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Brilliantly written Gavin. I find myself having to catch my breath in many parts of the story (especially in the major character death scenes) XD Ill get to work on taking notes on the spelling/grammatical errors. (Mostly just little spelling errors) Shouldnt take too long I suppose.
Either way this is a story definitly worth a second read. Its elegant filled with both description and emotion gripping the readers heart. Makes me feel as if I am a part of the story. (Kinda am in a way LOL) On the edge of my seat throughout the whole thing. Despite the many spoilers you gave me there were still plenty of surprises and twists in the end. What more can I say? Awesome job Gavin. :D

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Favorite Major characters: Draven and Alicia (yeah thats right I like them even over Gavin because they are epic XD
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Too bad they had to be broken apart for eternity
*sheds a tear*
Draven is a really noble character having all the qualities of a hero and is as described "much like a brother to Gavin" which makes him epic in itself. Alicia... I really dont want to explain why I like her so much ^_^'

Favorite Chapter: Chapter 9.
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Yeah I know its a bit surprising that I would like the chapter where one of my favorite character dies...still its emotional what can I say? Dravens death was really well written and played out. The description in this chapter was especially beautiful I still feel goosebumps as I think about the ravengers fight with Draven. He died a bit of a heros death and this was a good send off.
(Im planning on making my own little summaries of each chapter when I find the time so look forward to that! <3)

Favorite Minor Characters: Ministers Bruce and Gillian. Yeah I know it was your own guilty pleasure that brought them into the story but still they played their parts well despite it all. Especially Bruce getting his two moments in the spotlight before
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he comes to a slightly gruesome and semi ironic death


Favorite Line: I actually had alot of favorite lines. Many of them were really powerful and some are just too long to qoute here XD But I suppose if I had to choose...(probably because I only just read through chapter 14)
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'Moments before he raised his hand to cripple her in the fits of pain, she gave him an empty smile and said “Oh my lord, bless me with god’s duty to you.”'
This line honestly made my heart stop. The character just gained a whole new level of respect from me.(despite the line itself which I suppose is meant to be very sarcastic almost heartless) It was well written and I enjoy reading it over and over just for added effect.

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Spelling corrections, as well as minor edits and changes, to the story have now been done.
Enjoy, and if you haven't read the story yet, by all means, do so.

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