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 Post subject: Cathartic Writing
PostPosted: Mon Apr 18, 2011 1:36 am 
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Wanted a place where I can write, and get some feelings out on paper. Thought some others might wish to do the same.

My first writing:

I've made my mark on this world through the boy in my arms.
His life is my most precious gift.
His dreams are filled with the angels above,
as mine are filled with his future.
The man he will become.
The places he will see.
The people he will help.
My dreams become reality,
He's growing too fast.
I wish him to stay my little boy.
But then, my dreams would never come true.
Oh how i wish i could stop the hand of time.
Keep the world on pause to look at this precious boy forever.
In the light of innocence.
Time for him to make his own mark on the world.

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Where did it all go wrong?
Why did I say the lies?
Was it really so easy to believe,
that I couldn't love you anymore?
My heart is bleeding.
My mind is racing.
My soul is broken into a thousand pieces
and left here on the floor.
Come back to me.
Please, please come back to me.
Tell me you don't believe the lies.
Tell me I didn't hurt you.
Tell me I didn't just leave our life for
nothing at all.
There's no one here to blame but me.
And I'm so sorry.
Come back to me.
Please, please come back to me....

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Anyone can write in here... just to get rid of some pent up release.
Hope this is okay.

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 Post subject: Re: Cathartic Writing
PostPosted: Mon Apr 18, 2011 9:03 am 
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That's cool! I especially like the first poem.

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 Post subject: Re: Cathartic Writing
PostPosted: Wed Apr 20, 2011 5:32 pm 
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Thanks a ton for putting up this thread. I have a notebook (lost somewhere in my room) of poems like this. It helps me so much.
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I wish I could erase all the memories of her.
Of seeing all the people under her curse.
The one closest to me and the ones not as close.
None could see what she was doing.
A couple of them realized before it was too late.
Who knows if the rest are still stuck.
All she brought me was pain, both subtle and not.
Oh, how I wish I could erase her from my memory.
So much for being my friend.
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I'm over you, but you continue to try and talk to me.
Don't you realize that I don't want you around anymore?
If you really did still love me and want to do what you could to make me happy,
You would get away from me and not talk to me.
I don't need you anymore. I don't want you near me anymore.
I have my best friend who is like a brother to me. (<----- long story :P)
It's not awkward to be around him, but it always was with you.
It was always your way, never what I wanted.
Taking you out of my life was the best thing I have ever done.
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Again, thanks a lot for posting this thread. It helps me a lot to be able to get this stuff out. I'll probably post fairly often on here too.


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 Post subject: Re: Cathartic Writing
PostPosted: Sun May 01, 2011 7:47 pm 
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You keep me locked up in this house all day
And I have know way of ever getting out yet.
I can't go out and have some time with friends.
I can't go and have fun on my own.
You won't let me go anywhere on my own.
All I want is some freedom,
And you won't even give me that.
You put so much stress on me to be imposibly perfect.
I'm sick of it and don't know how much more I can handle.
I just keep thinking that I have one year left here.
Then, I will have the freedom I long for if I can make it until then.
Until then, I suffer in my room with just facebook to talk to my friends.
I can't wait for college.


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 Post subject: Re: Cathartic Writing
PostPosted: Sat May 14, 2011 6:47 pm 
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Oldie, but Goodie.....

Life and Death are but the same
They leave their mark just like a flame
In life a flame that never dies
In death a flame that always tries
To take away the ones we love
Then flies away just like a dove
But just as always they leave their mark
On those who live in the dark
In dark they know of nothing to come
Until it's left us and then it's gone....


I'm so afraid of what might be
To die before I get to see
All the places I've never been
When my life is just starting to begin
Do we sleep forever more
Do we become once again reborn.
Or do we go with God and Jesus
To wait for loved ones to be with us
I guess I'll have to wait and see
But I'm still afraid of what might be......

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