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 Post subject: the really bad story thing I made up on the spot
PostPosted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 6:07 pm 
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Location: Colchester, essex, england, UK, europe, world, solar sytem, universe, galaxy
so I just felt bored and decided to write a short story. I didn't really think this over I just typed it out. Critique is allowed

Chapter 1
The black woods was not a very plesant place too meet up with your best friend but thats what Matt was doing. He had arranged to meet up wiht his best friend Josh before headding into the woods to explore. Matt had ignored the pleas of his Mother telling him not to go because it was 'evil' as she had put it.

Matt leaned against an old oak tree and hummed to himself looking for any signs of life. as he looked right he saw a figure walking through the fog with a flashlight, it turned out to be Josh. Josh walked upto Matt and smiled his brown hair in it's usual position atop his head.
Josh stopped and smiled. "hey Matt" he said.
Matt nodded and replied "You took your time I thought you weren't gonna show."
Josh just shrugged and let out a single word "Dad."
Josh's Mum had passed away 1 year ago and he has been living with his dad since
"arn't they all that annoying?"
"yeah, he was desperate though"
Matt just smiled, he loved the way Josh talked about his dad like he didn't have a care in the world. Matt picked up his flashlight and pointed it towards the abiss. "you ready?" he asked
Josh smiled back at him and said "hell yeah"

RIP Matthew Anthony Staples 6/1/2011

 Post subject: Re: the really bad story thing I made up on the spot
PostPosted: Thu Feb 17, 2011 8:53 am 

Joined: Sat Jul 10, 2010 6:05 pm
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Location: DK isles
the bigening was funny are you going to make chapter 2

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i give credit to sephiroth and insanity

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