Chapter 1:

Everything started out as a normal day. I was laying in my bed trying to wake up. I look at my phone to see that it is 10:30 am, and I haven't gotten any calls or texts from anyone. I was strange to see that, especially on a Saturday. I finally got the strength to get out of bed, I was still shaken up by the dream that I had.. A dream involving Emili being kidnapped and me going all the incredible lengths to save her. I have had this dream before and I couldn't figure out why I couldn't stop dreaming that same dream every few days. As I walked into the bathroom to brush my teeth, I got a call. It was a blocked number. I usually never answered blocked calls, but I did this time. Once I answered, before I even said 'Hello', I heard someone screaming in the background. "Who is this?!" I asked. A voice replied "Mikey!! I hope you the best of luck in your attempts to save your beloved". I reply "What are you talking about?!" Now I had a vague Idea of what was going on, but I didn't want to believe it. I kept on hoping to God that it wasn't true.. I heard a very familiar voice scream out in the background, "Mikey! HELP ME!!" I couldn't speak.. I was afraid at that moment! I held the phone in my hand, I was shaking from fear that it was actually Emili in Danger. I heard her voice again screaming out "Mikey! Please help me, Sweetheart!" *Click* The other line went dead. I felt danger deep in my heart, the kind of feeling where you know that your love is in danger. I couldn't move for about 10 seconds. I couldn't breathe for a moment. I fell to my knees thinking that there was nothing I could do. Then suddenly, one promise I made came to the front of my mind. "I promised taht I would save you if you were ever in danger. I never lied to you when i said that I never broke a promise.. I would rather die than break this one.. I'M COMING FOR YOU EMILI!!"

I ran out the door, got into my car trying to start it, but the battery was dead.. Now I felt like something was trying to stop me. But I didn't let anything stop me. I always said that If there was no other way, I would walk to her.. Now I knew that was something that I had to do. I started walking, but right as I got down the block, I got knocked out...... I woke up hours later in a dark room, but i douldn't see anything. I felt like i was blinded. I heard a bunch of people around me talking. "What should we do with these two?" "I don't know. In a way, I still want them to see each other before they die today. I'm not that heartless" "Ok, then. Take the blind-folds off of them." I suddenly regained my sight. I looked around and saw a buch of people in black suits. I looked to the left of me and saw Emili tied up and knocked out. "WHAT DID YOU DO TO HER?!" I screamed. They all just looked at me and laughed. "So, you are alive.. Well atleast I had the heart to let you see her one last time before you two die today." one henchman said. I looked over at Emili with a tear rolling down my face. I then looked back at them and they were still laughing. I screamed at them "YOU ALL FIND THIS FUNNY?!" The second henchman said "Ah, we find this truly amusing. Two hopeless lovers unable to do one thing to save one another." I looked down crying a bit because I thought I may have broken my first promise to her. But right when I thought there was no hope to gain, I heard the one thing that could give me the strength even when I am in the deepest hole.. "Mikey, Please.. I believe in you. I know you will not break your promise, Ever!" I reached into my back pocket barely reaching my pocket knife. The henchmen were distracted by the big screen in the lair. They were getting orders from their boss. I open my pocket knife and start cutting the rope that have my hands tied. My hands were free. Now for my feet, I reached down trying to get my feet untied and accidentally cut my ankle in the process. I held in my screams of pain, but as soon as I got everything untied, they all saw me free. I see one of them run over and push a button. The chair that Emili was sitting on suddenly started falling down a tunnel underneath her. "EMILI!! You son of a--" One of the henchmen interupted me "Now, now.. No reason to be cursing. If you do not cooperate, you will never see her again." I was unsure of what to do. I sat there with my head down in despair.. I knew who to go after.. I heard the order from their boss to rid of her before I did anything that would put their plan to risk. "I will get through all of you, and after that... YOUR BOSS IS DEAD!!" I screamed. I heard the boss say this "Dispose of him".

Chapter 3

I stood there in a fighting stance. All the henchmen starting running towrds me with knives and nats. I had nothing except my pocket knife. I threw my pocket knife at the first guard and hit him in the knee. The second guard grabbed Mike and held him down. But Mike had kneed hin in the ribs and pushed the henchmen off of him. The third henchmen came walking up to Mike. This henchmen was huge. Three times the size of Mike. Mike stood there looking up wondering how to take him down, then he remembered something his uncle always told him. "Doesn't matter how big the person is, everyone has a weak point!" Mike got a maniacal grin on his face and kicked him where the sun don't shine. The third henchmen went down. "That was almost too easy..Must of been paying minimum wage.. Now... where could the boss be?" Mike starts looking around for clues, and finds a note. He opens the note and reads what it says. "If you are reading this, then congratulations.. you beat my worthless henchmen, but I won't go down so easily. Even love won't be able to give you enough strength to defeat me." Mike crumbles up the note and throws it on the ground knowing that it was no help to his location. The only thing he could do is stand where Emili was and try to push that button. Michael then pused the button and jumped into the hold that opened up. For 3 minutes, he went down a tunnel screaming. Finally, he reached the end of the tunnel, and landed on his back in a weird abandoned warehouse. Mike had no clue where he was, he looked around looking for a way out, but all he could find were barred windows. He walked around thinking that he had actually lost the fight, then he saw something that Emili had left behind. "A note?" Asked Mike. He opened up that note. "Mikey, I am safe right now, but I don't know how long that will last, please try to follow the clues I leave behind. I really hope you find this note. The way I got out of this warehouse is I found an underground route. Underneath the chair in the corner. I will be leaving notes to assure you that I am ok, and to lead you to me. If I do not leave a note in that location, Do not worry. I will find a way to clue you in to my next location. I love you, Mikey. Emili" Mikey stands there holding the note to his side. "Emili.. You are so clever.. I would of never thought of that.. I'm on my way!"

Chapter 4

Mikey goes to the corner wher Emili said the underground route was. He finds a crease in the floor and a handle was sticking out. Mikey pulls the handle, but it wouldn't open.. He sees a combination lock on there.
"What? She didn't tell me about this?"
Mikey takes another look at the note and turns it around. He finally knows what all those numbers are.
"A combination... Of course!"
Mikey then begins playing with the combination lock. 13-31-24 The lock comes open. Mikey pulls the door open and jumps down. He sees a concrete floor below him as he's falling then sees a ladder that he could of grabbed on to. Mikey reaches his hands out trying to grab the ladder.
"Almost...."
He barely grabs the ladder and stops himself from falling the rest of the way and begins to climb down. 5 minutes later, he reaches the bottom of the tunnel and begins to walk through. He was walking while trying to avoid all the rats in the tunnel. The smell was erie and made him gag multiple times.
"I.. *ack* I can't believe that *ack* Emili actually made it through *ack* here.."
Finally after like 10 minutes of walking and gagging, he sees a dead end. He is looking all around for a note, but sees nothing. As he looks to his right, he sees another tunnel that he can only crawl through.
"I'll do it for you, Emili."
Mikey gets on his hands and knees and begins crawling through the smaller tunnel. he sees a dim light at the very end. Mikey is trying to be as quiet as possible, then his phone starts to ring. Mikey quickly silences it because he knows that it is not as important as finding his true love. He continues crawling and crawling until eventually he is out of that tunnel and in a whole new building. Mikey is drenched in sweat. His hair looks like he has just gotten out of the shower, sadly he didn't smell clean. Mikey looks everywhere, and finally spots another note.

"Mikey, I'm glad you made it this far. That tunnel made me gag so many times, I am surprised that I made it through..."
"I KNEW IT!!"
Mikey continues reading.
"I'm just gonna climb out that window at the front of the building. We can't see each other until we know that we are away from the boss. I'm gonna try to make it back to that warehouse though, because I never had a chance to grab that purple rose you gave me. My next location is gonna be in the alley to the right of this building. I'll leave you something there that will ensure you that I am safe. I love you, Mikey.
PS: I need a shower after going through those 2 tunnels!!"

Mikey puts the note in his pocket and begins walking towards the window.
"On my way!"

Chapter 5

Mikey then examines everything around the warehouse that he could possibly use as a weapon just incase he confronts the boss on his way. He searches every corner, every tile, everything in the warehouse and finds nothing but a bunch of broken chairs.
"Ok, There's gotta be something I can use.."
Mikey finds nothing at all so then he decides to climb out the window. He manages to squeeze through and lands on his stomach on the hot concrete sidewalk. People are all staring at him but he all but ignores the unfamiliar faces. He has to make a decision. Right or left? He then flips a coin to decide which way he goes. Heads. Right it is. He turns down the right alleyway to find out that he has just confronted a new henchmen.
"You again! You're not getting any further this time." The henchmen says.
"You just never learn do you?" Says Mikey.
The henchmen pulls out a pistol and points it at Mikey.
"You have 2 choices, give up and come wiht me, or attempt to attack me and recieve a bullet through your pity little brain. Which do you choose?"
Mikey stands there thinking and sees an explosive propane barrel sitting near the dumpster.
Mikey sighs and says "I give up. Just let me grab my bag behind this dumpster."
Mikey runs behind the dumpster and picks up the propane tank. He throws it at the henchmen. The henchmen shoots trying to hit Mikey, but instead hits the propane tank. Mikey dives out of the alleyway barely missing the explosion. He has a few 3rd degree burns, but genuinely ignores them.
"Like I said, you just never learn!"
Mikey walks through th efire and picks up the flaming hot pistol in his hands. He quickly puts it in his pocket and then goes to the left alleyway only to find a dead end...
"No note?"
Mikey has to guess from now on. He has to try to remember what Emili said to him in one of the notes. He then recalls what she wrote in the last one.
"We can't see each other until we know that we are away from the boss. I'm gonna try to make it back to that warehouse though, because I never had a chance to grab that purple rose you gave me. My next location is gonna be in the alley to the right of this building. I'll leave you something there that will ensure you that I am safe."
"Oh, no... The warehouse.. I'm coming!"

This is pretty good. I can see why you enjoy the rpg section so much (obviously lady's quest in particular). What will happen to Ashen? Duh Duh DUUUUUUUHHHHHH

Part 2 is up.

Part 3 is up.. finally!

Who knew I was so smart? This made me laugh a little bit! Lol
Ashen

Wow Snertz this is pretty good. Love in danger is always a good writing topic. Might i suggest a few things?
this is going! ^_^
1) you should stick to one POV, part 1 and 2 were from your POV and part 3 was from 3rd person. i was a bit confusing.
2) don't have long blocks of texet, make sure to differentiate paragraphs, and everytime someone new speaks, it's a new paragraph.

That's the advice i have for now, other than that i would like to see were this is going! ^_^

Part 4 is up. And I tried to follow your tips that you gave me, Cap. Thanks.

Here I come to gives you a thumbs up for the story! and GL.

Part 5 is finally alive!