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 Post subject: Final Fantasy VI: Senderos de Traición
PostPosted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 8:51 pm 
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This is the thread were you help me improve my story.

Last night I couldn't sleep because of this idea, it's something that I'm making right on the spot.

This, uhm, story is like a novelization of the FFVI from a very peculiar point of view... our beloved Imperial Soldiers: Terra & Celes.

I wanna make the first third a background story for both characters and develop the story that leads to the game.

The second third will be a retelling of the game in the World of Balance, and the thrird one, the World of Ruin.

Some, maybe many, things will be changed from the story we know.

I don't consider myself a good writer so I need all your help.

Specially in the action scenes. I would like some of you to help me with that when needed.

Alright, please read this one. Enjoy!

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 Post subject: Re: Final Fantasy VI: Senderos de Traición
PostPosted: Thu Dec 09, 2010 12:54 am 
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I'm not so proud of the last chapter, I wasn't concentrated and made it on a rush 'cause I had to go to work so.... my apologies.


.... wait.... no one's reading :P

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 Post subject: Re: Final Fantasy VI: Senderos de Traición
PostPosted: Thu Dec 09, 2010 9:37 am 
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Celes wrote:
.... wait.... no one's reading :P


Not true. I'm reading. And I'm finding it very fascinating. A fun, actiony story. :)

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 Post subject: Re: Final Fantasy VI: Senderos de Traición
PostPosted: Thu Dec 09, 2010 11:33 am 
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Thank you!

I promise it will get better.

The next chapters will have a more deep story, focusing in the interactions between the characters. So far they're not doing anything, haha, gotta put them to work! :P

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 Post subject: Re: Final Fantasy VI: Senderos de Traición
PostPosted: Thu Dec 09, 2010 1:57 pm 
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There!

I really LOVE how this last chapter turned out to be.
It's really inspiring to know that someone is reading, I guess, haha.


And yeeeeees... there are Star Wars elements in there. More to come :P Just because I love it!!!

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 Post subject: Re: Final Fantasy VI: Senderos de Traición
PostPosted: Fri Jan 14, 2011 6:57 pm 
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Oh, well.....

I'll do what I can to post another chapter tomorrow.

I have the idea in my mind already, I just have to let it roll.

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 Post subject: Re: Final Fantasy VI: Senderos de Traición
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I am also reading. I just clicked it out of curiosity and I'm liking it even if I don't understand Final Fantasy in general. I've never played any of the games. But yeah it's a pretty good story

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 Post subject: Re: Final Fantasy VI: Senderos de Traición
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Thank you!

I'm trying to make it easy to read even for those not familiar with the game. But if you have questions, feel free to ask, alright?

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 Post subject: Re: Final Fantasy VI: Senderos de Traición
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You're Welcome

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 Post subject: Re: Final Fantasy VI: Senderos de Traición
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I'll try to write more often, I wanna get to the game arc soon or I'll forget the changes I wanted to make. I'm also thinking that after this is done, I may make an abridged version of the game XD

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